pointers needed for new story

This is my first try at writing for other I would like pointers and critics that are constructive as well, to see if there would be an interest in such project.

Thank you


The title; Black Jade Tiger


teaser


[Where am I...]


Squinting my eyes as I let my gaze wander to my surroundings


[A tropical forest? Why am I in a tropical forest?]


I tell myself... Shaking my head as if to get off the dizziness or and wake myself up, since I can’t be in...

pointers needed for new story